Chapter 17

          "Before he can finish the word "go," he releases the sling and I forget him, I forget Uriah, and family, and all the things that could malfunction and lead to my death."

                                                                       -Tris

This chapter was probably one of my favorite chapters, and I've probably said that a lot, and to be honest I'll probably say it again! But this chapter was really, truly, amazing. It really awoke the whole book, and I can now see that Tris is really, truly, cut out for Dauntless.

In this chapter Uriah and some of the other Dauntless-born initiates as well as their members, took Tris up to an abandoned building. At this point I was all, "why an abandoned building?" And then this really rude girl named Lynn tried to act all superior to Tris, but Tris had the best comeback! And it was right! I was so proud of my homegirl. Wow... I'm sounding really weird right now, I'll stop.

Anyway... They went up to the top of the building and they got in line one by one to go ZIP LINING DOWN THE BUILDING! That would be so amazing, but I once watched this show called Off The Map, and this guy got his arm stuck in a zip line and it ripped his skin off and then he got stuck! So now for the rest of my life, zip lines have been ruined and I will probably never ever zip line in my life. I'll save you from the rest of the gory details, but you know.

This quote just makes me shiver. It is the most perfect sentence any author has ever written. I don't know why.. it's just so...flawless. And you know, some people think that to be flawless, you have to have perfect skin or goregous hair. but flawless can describe anything, or anyone. Flawless is definitely what this quote is.