Chapter 16

        "No one who would want to punish Peter has the authority to, and no one who has the authority to punish him would want to." 

- Tris 

Ugh the beginning of this chapter makes me sad. Al talks to Tris and tells her the reason that he didn't want to talk to his parents is that he didn't want them to know that he was doing terrible during initiation. Right now, I feel really bad for him because this is the chapter that they get ranked, and I don't want to see him leave.

Anyway-The ranking go like this.

1. Edward
2. Peter
3. Will
4. Christina
5. Molly
6. Tris
7. Drew
8. Al
9. Myra

AWWWWW OMG POOR AL): Well..that was my first thought actually. Then, that night Tris woke up to a horrible scream. The lights turned on and she saw, along with everyone else, Edward, lying on the floor covered in blood. He is clutching his eye, and there is a butter knife sticking out of it! Like ew, no, ew, no, EW! Tris tries to help him as best as she can until the nurse gets there.

She then realizes that Drew and PETER are not in the room. (Obviiiii they did it) Anyway, Tris cleans up the blood off the floor because no one else will. (Rude) At the end, Edward was cut from the initiation because he couldn't continue. Myra left with him because she "couldn't stand the thought of not being with him." (Really weird, I never liked them.) So Al got to stay! YAY! Or nayy? I guess we'll see...